Daphne: I would say this is the story of being haunted by one’s reality, or hanuted by something one is trying to get away from. I’m still grappling on which is better suited for the story. First off, your attention to detail in this story […]
Category: WRT 312- Journals
Journal #24 (WRT-312)
Mackie: I would say your story is the story of a right person but not the right time. Overall, its written very well. You can picture the narrator while she goes through the motions almost like a camera following her. I think using first person […]
Journal #23 (WRT-312)
Lizzie: I believe your story is the story of an unexpected connection. I enjoyed the detail that you provided as it felt a picture was painted in terms of setting and each characters actions. Also, the dialogue reflected the characters well also. I could get […]
Journal #21 (WRT-312)
Bullets of what I have learned about the writing process through Story #1
Journal #20 (WRT-312)
Coco, I thought this was a really interesting story! Thinking about “what” this story is, I would say it is the story of unrequited love or the reality of grieving someone still living. The amount of descripton ou used in the story really drove it […]
Journal #19 (WRT-312)
Malachi: Really interesting story you’re building here! I thought the level of sensory detail you added was wonderful. There were moments I could almost smell/see/taste the foods and instances you were describing. The amount of description also didn’t feel to heavy in comparison to the […]
Journal #18 (WRT-312)
Dear Cammy, This is the story of a main character named April living with the guilt of her past mistakes. More specifically, allowing her partner to take the fall for a crime so she can pursue her future. I liked how you opened the story […]
Journal #16 (WRT-312)
Dear Brady, I think you have a really interesting concet here with the story you’re building. It caught me as a surprise that it had to do with AI because it’s such a current topic that I feel isn’t vastly covered (or I haven’t read […]
Journal #13 (WRT-312)
For this chapter, I was really interested in the section that used O’Connors example to explain how theme is often subliminal and subject to perspective, but if the writer knows their theme, then the audience will receive it. Also, how to still have guardrails on […]
Journal #14 (WRT-312)
Lizzie: From my understanding, this story is about a mother-daughter duo in the midst of some supernatural emergency. It seemed that Janine was experiencing a transformation while her mother, Margot, was tending to her. The first thing that I liked about this story was how […]